Blog 19

Blog 16 :

I think the makers of The Meatrix films used The Matrix as the basis for their arguments because the difference things are the prodution of people in the Matrix and the prodution of animals in the Meatrix. The idea is the same about the Matrix and Meatrix because they want to say about taking the blue pills to find the truth.

Blog 17 : Reflection

I think the makers of The Meatrix films used The Matrix as the basis for their arguments because the difference things are the prodution of people in the Matrix and the prodution of animals in the Meatrix. The idea is the same about the Matrix and Meatrix because they want to say about taking the blue pills to find the truth.  
 

Blog 15 : The Responding of Meatrix

     Watching the Meatrix is how the food dairy industry make messy thing and producing the food has a lot of bad bacteria in the food. The people eat the industrial food is not healthy for their health because the movie shows us the workers has a lot of dangerous by working on the food. Sometimes, they are doing their jobs quickly, they can meet their harmful lives. Cuting the meat is very so fast and the workers could not do as the machine, they can be trouble of their hands by cuting the machine. When they are careless doing the job, their hands was cut and their blood are flowing on the food. I think that this condition is very terrible of my life and I am afraid of eating the industry food. The movie Meatrix shows us how the food is very dirty and the workers have been dangerous in the worker condition.
   First of all, if we do not know about the industrial food, we can buy the food can and eat the food stuff. When we are sick, we go to see the doctor, but we do not think about eating the food has included the bacteria. We do not see inside the food production and do not know about how they are packing in the food. The Meatrix flim tells us that they pumping the hormones in the meat and making the family farm. All animal is fed the low dose of antibiotics and they are growing faster by making antibiotic. We are sicking of indirecting eating hormones from the meat. The contribution of antibiotic-resistant in human is unhealthty to the people. The movie shows us that we need to know about the sustainable food as well as agriculture, and also tells about the problem with factory farming. These day, most food are additive artificial flavor and antibiotics hormones. The people need to know about when they looking for the food, they have to look carefully on the package label what they are refering. Eating the healthy food is good for our health and we need to learn about the safety food. Most of large family farm has a lot of air pollution, waste product and chemical process. That is why Morpheus tells Neo that he will destroy the industry and provides the sustainable food. The people do not eat the industrial food and try to eat the healthy food for their health.

Blog 12 : Reflection and Evaluation

 When I use the essay program, I have to think about brain storm first for my essay. I have to find the evidence for the claim and thinking about how to claim first. Every step is clearly thinking about how I need to claim and explain about my evidence. Later, I have to brain storm my supporting details for the example. I think that the essay program is very helpful to me because I clearly know about how to claim, evidence and reason. First of all, I confuse my essay about what is claim and evidence clearly, but now I know that I can use the essay program whenever I write my essay. I think that my writing will be evaluated CATW test and I will get a great score.

Blog 14 : The Meatrix

 I think the makers of The Meatrix films used The Matrix as the basis for their choosing is the same to take the red pill. The young pig named Neo went in to the real world with Moopheus. Moopheus showed him where the food came from and what the industry did. He explained about the serious thing of industry and wanted to shut down the function. The connection idea of The Matrix and The Meatrix showed to people what is the secret of real world and what people did not know about the truth. Everything was the creating of the fake things, and the people needed to destroy of the fake world. When the people saw the movie, they were educated what they were living in the world. Moreover, they understood about how dangerous of lives. After watching the movie, I was sick about my food and I did not want to eat the food by making the industry.

Blog 13 : The Matrix

There is a protagonist of the film The Matrix shows. Neo has gotten the message from Morpheus that he has to follow the rabbit hole. When Morpheus meets Neo, he offers Neo that he want to take red pill to find the truth or take the blue pill to end the story. As Neo chooses the red pill, Morpheus shows him that the screct of the world. The beginning of the story is the allusions to Alice's story to run away from the agency. Neo sees the wondering things that the people does not actually know the truth of the world. Everything is the fate of the creating and Morpheus tells him that they need to shut down all funtion.

Blog 12 : Option 2

 Neo looked at the computer screen that follow the white rabbit and heard the door was knocking. He opened the door and dealt with the man. When  When I watch "The Matrix" movie, I am interesting in what goes on next. I am curious that Neo chooses the red pill what different between real world and new world. 

blog 11: CATW practice

I read the essay " The Dangers of Reality TV" written by Timothy Sexton says that the several messages send out to the young fans through reality TV such as competition, the image values and "obsolescence of education". The successful of key is reality television of competition because it shows that the people who want to win million dollars or who want to marry a multimillionaire husband. Second message is image rather than ability because a singer who has a better voice but he cannot be actor on reality television. The image is more powerful than the ability. Third, most dangerous message is that education is not necessary to have the American dream, for many college graduates can not make a lot of money than lack of education. If you have a full of money, you do not need to go to school and learn about difficult education. The makers suggest that the human society have to think about why the powers want people to believe the reality.

I learn that the essay is the most educational. The writer claims that " the key to success is image rather than ability." I agree with the author because the out side world has happened that kind of situation. The ability is not important than the image even though the skill is highest. The reality television shows that the message is true of competition in the real world and also send about " qualified- to- win contestant over a contestant".

I found that the similar message of situation that the Olympic game in China. I read the article about  "the real singer" said that the teenage girl on reality television was not really a singer. A real singer has a good voice and ability to sing; however, her face is not beautiful and attractive. Many people watch on TV that the actor or actress needs to be attractive face so that they cannot be bored. On the other hand, she has full of skillful and ability, but she cannot show her image on reality television. The maker makes a decision of his business so that he can get a name of producer and earn a lot of money. I heard that the opening of Olympic song was very popular among the people, and also  decoration.Before the article did not come out ; everyone knew that the girl was pretty face and better voice. Her singing was more attractive to the people by watching the Olympic opening game, but her image did not show up on the reality. Now, I understand that Timothy Sexton says us that the reason of "The Dangers of Reality TV".

blog 10: Lable the claim, reasons, and evidence

Claim   ---- I want to take a blue pill.

Reason ---- because the real life is possible for human being and I do not like anything creating and fate on me.

Evidence--- Matrix took a red pill, but he regretted why he did not take the blue pill. However, I thought that he took the red pill or blue pill, it did not matter what he took. I think that motivating is the different from the real human. The red pill is re boring the human but it is not natural. I think that Matrix is Robot but he dies as a human some day. Robot is a machine and does not die. That is a different thing between Matrix and Robot. Matrix follows his dreams and motivating, but his action is faster than human being. He can jump a long distance and can do the magic thing. Nevertheless, I want to take a blue pill and still live in my real life. I don't want to do magic thing and make me crazy thing.

Blog 8 : Responding to a significant topic in The Truman Show

     "Truman Show " is the real life of human being because every thing is the real that we pass our lives everyday. When we see the Truman, we follow his trace is what he does in his daily life and what he thinks.  Truman behaves wildly and is constantly being told to "grow up",but he is immature and everything he thinks and acts like childhood. He was afraid of the sea because his father died in the sea. He never forgets of his father and always has a night mare when he thinks about his father. Cristoff creates the real world for Truman and produces the show to the people. Many people watches the Truman show what is going on next, so they are interesting in Truman what he does, what he feels and what he thinks.
     Cristoff creates what he considers a "perfect world" for Truman to live "happily ever after". I won't choose to live in Cristoff's world because the fate world has harmless but everything is fate. I think that I want to use my own brain and feeling what I want to be. I want to live in real world because human life has difficult and easy situation. I want to solve my problem using my brain and I do not like everything is someone crates me. Truman life is everything is OK with his society that Cristoff's creating  but Truman has difficult problem Cristoff's already solve it. Human lives has not get easy what I want because when I strongly desire what I want, I have to get myself. However, Truman show is what he thinks and what he wants; Cristoff has known and creates for Truman. Truman has not known what is difficult and easy so that he is immature. Everyone has treated him like a child so that I can watch a funny show. When I watch Truman show, we know what he thinks about it is impossible and I want to stop him. He needs to get out of creating world and lives in the real world. Cristoff stops what Truman want to go and tries to change his life. I think Truman's life is similar situation in my won life that has changed the way because my parents want to control me not to do this and that. They are not allow what I want to do and stop me. That is why I want to find my real life like Truman does the last. I want to create my own real world and face any problem what I meet. I want to use my own brain and to be a successful of my life.

Blog 9 : Telecommute Report out

   "THE MATRIX" discussion telecommute was pretty interesting. We discussed about many questions in the movie "The Matrix". Some questions arise through out the movie. When I watched the movie done I wasn't having a clear concept that why he did not choose the blue bill and he wanted to take the red pill and follow the rabbit hole goes. Think about my own life which ways I want to choose.  I had many different point of views in this questions.  I found out that many students agreed Neo took a red bill why he did not try to take a blue bill. The questions that was being discuss went well. Especially I learn in this discussion that life is filled with different things and experiences.  That is why I understand that the Matrix movie gives us thinking and enlightening of my life.

blog 7 : Reflecion and Evaluation

   I think that I have done pretty much well, but I still have a grammar problem. I try to keep on improving myself and prepare for CAT-W test. I am facing with this class a lot of challenges because my professor gives us a lot of work to do with my assignments on time, and I have to give a comment to the other blog. That is very helpful to me because I have to read what the other person writes about the essay is good or not, and also I have a good idea what they write. I do not know about my essay is good or not because sometime I write my essay that I do not know how to response. I am not sure that my point of view and critical thinking are suitable for the ideas of writer. Sometimes I feel that I miss the author idea because English is my second language and idea is not the same what the author wants to say.

Blog 6 : Review Socrates' and Plato's Allegory

We are living in the world, but we do not know what the world is meaning to us. Once we were born, we knew that our lives were meaningful and so romatic to live in the world. Sometimes, we think about our philosophy is too narrow and can not follow the Scorate's idea. I think that what my stage but I do not exactly know who I am and what I am doing because philosophy is too difficult to understand our lives. Someone thought that they lived in the small world because they were born in their own country and died in there. They did not know about the real world and also did not see the beautiful things surrounding them. They were holding their old philosophy and no one could not persuade them to go somewhere as well as look  for somethin new things.
 Scorate said that we are following our shadows, but we need to see the actual world that what happen the outside. We need to open the eye and look at the sky and sun, for when we are staying inside the cave, how we can see the beautiful world around us. I think that most people are still chained in their lives and they do not want to change their lives anymore. First of all, for me, I do not go anywhere and do like to stay at home because I do not like to deal with the people. If I live alone, I will think about something and stay in my small room like a small world but I am happy with my life. I think that no one will bother me and I have a dream of my future plan so that I want to forward my goal. Some friends told me that I did not live like that because I have to deal with many people and step forward my plan to get my goal. If I live in the world, I have to open my eye and see what happen to the world. If I do not look outside what happening that how I can decide and what I know to do my next step. I have to learn about the actual things that what is right or wrong and can not follow the other shadow.
I agree with the Scorate's philosophy and this alert to me that I do not live in my small world. I have to go around the world if I have to and I can open my mind and listen what the people say to me. The most  important things are that we have to break our chain and think about what we have to do our future plans. Our powers and souls are courage to be successful of our lives that give us the Scorate's lightening. 

Blog 5 ; "Allegory of the Cave" Summary

"The Allegory of the Cave" written 360 B.C.E; translated by Benjamin Jowett told us what Socrates was talking with Glaucon. Socrates said that our human beings was an educated or uneducated person because  they did not think about long way and also tied their legs and necks chained like prisoners . They would know their own shadows between the fire and the wall , but they did not guess what the shadow should come next sitting in front of the fire. Glaucon agreed with Socrates because they could only see their shadows and they did not know what the truth image before them. If they looked back their necks round and walked towards the light after breaking their chains, they would see a nature of beautiful world. Socrates explained that he saw the light at the outside and discovered the reality such as the sun, the moon, the star and the water. He told them that the season and the years that gave the people in the visible world to behold the whole things.  He tried to persuade his followers to observe the passing shadows and made the decision of their future with honors and glories. He claimed that the prisoners could imagine their understanding and think about what was true or false, right or wrong so that their souls and powers could see what happen in the world.

Blog 4 : "Hype" Workshop and Revision

According to the article "Hype", advertisements are the most popular of the mental pollutants. The rate of marketing message displayed on the TV commercial every hours, and people could see the advertisements every where while they waited the buses, billboards, and stadiums. The advertisements attracted to the people because they wanted to sell the products as much as they could. People could see and hear the advertisements as they went to the shopping or the bank. There was no way to run out of the advertisements in our lives at the moments. When I read " Hype", I agreed with the author "Kalle Lasn" because I believed that what the author said "Hype" to the people and why she chose it. 

I read the essay titled "Hype", written by the Kalle Lasn tells us about the advertisements made the people as the mental illness. Writer tells us that we have tons of billion commercials advertisement while we are watching TV and our brain will be filled with many commercials. Moreover, we can see ads many places whenever we go;for example, we fill our car at the gas station,bank and supermarket. We could not run away even if we did not want to see the advertisements, and hear the kid singing like " the Oscar Meyer wiener song".Whenever we watched the drama, the advertisements always showed 15 minutes on the TV. That was interrupted to the people to watch the TV; on the other hand, the commercial  was influenced to the kids because they liked to watch the new advertisements that attracted to them. Therefore, our people can see the advertisements that we go anywhere,as the commercial advertisements are the most powerful in the marketing today.

The author said that "Every day and estimated 12 billion display ads, 3 million radio commercials, and more than 200,000 TV commercials are dumped into North America's collective unconscious. These days the advertisements are overwhelming to the people because commercial companies are improving their products and introduced to the people using the advertisements. For example, they produced the new products, but the people did not know about how they are good and how much effective on their products. First of all, the commercials advertising let the people know their products are good to use and cheaper than the other products. Especially, North America could not control the commercial,and the rate of increasing advertisements were spreading all over the world. Whenever we are watching TV or listening to the radio, the the advertising announced their products are good to the people. Every time I saw the new products and advertisements everywhere I went; however, I did not remember many advertisements. That was why the marketing company tried to reach their products to the people,as most people could see their product message or logo whenever they recognized and remembered them. 

 "Your kids watch Pepsi and Snickers ads in the classroom." expressed the author. For instance, the kids liked to watch the advertisements most of the time because they liked them that they could not forget and wanted to buy them. Therefore, the company tried to reach the kids to see their products easily in the classroom and also set up the interactive screens so that we could see the advertisements while we were shopping in the supermarket.  My niece and nephew always wanted to buy the things after they saw the advertisements,but my sister was disappointed the advertisements because that was affected to her budget. She could not buy whenever they showed up a new advertisements and afford them. Moreover, the advertisements are spoiled the people, for some are not good for the health. However, we could not run away from the product message and could hear like the kid singing "the Oscar Meyer wiener song." 

In conclusion, a company executive use the most powerful micro marketing and spread the advertisements all over the world. We can see commercial advertising whenever we go and sick of many advertisements. Obviously, we cannot run not to see the advertisements,and they play the significant roles in our lives. 

Blog 3 : "Hype" Summary

I read the essay titled "Hype", written by the Kalle Lasn tells us about the advertisements made the people as the mental illness. Writer tells us that we had tons of billion commercials advertisement while we were watching TV and our brain would be filled with many commercials. Moreover, we could see ads many places whenever we go as we filled our car at the gas station,bank and supermarket. We could not run away even if we did not want to see the advertisements, and hear the kid singing like " the Oscar Meyer wiener song".

Blog 2 : Annotating: Reflection (paragraph)

•  I got from thinking about annotations with the class because that was very helpful understanding what I read and what was an important main idea of the passage. Moreover, I got the critical thinking of the idea and asked the question by myself after rereading the passage. 
• I got from writing annotations for "Is Google Making Us Stupid?" with my partner when we were discussing about what we got the main idea and learning about what I did not think about something that I miss the idea from my partners. And also, I had a new idea writing essay after discussing with my partners and responded to my essay.
•  I learned about the reading by annotating it by using circle key words that I do not know about the meaning and underline the the main idea. Finding the background information that will help me understand the reading passage and some examples that will help me to write about my essay.
• Three annotating make me a better writer are read the article, re-read the article and make the reading personal.

Blog 1 "Hype"

  According to the article "Hype", advertisements are the most popular of the mental pollutants. The rate of marketing message displayed on the TV commercial every hours, and people could see the advertisements every where while they waited the buses, billboards, and stadiums. The advertisements attracted to the people because they wanted to sell the products as much as they could. People could see and hear the advertisements as they went to the shopping or the bank. There was no way to run out of the advertisements in our lives at the moments.

 When I read " Hype", I agreed with the author "Kalle Lasn" because I believed that what the author said "Hype" to the people and why she chose it. Whenever we watched the drama, the advertisements always showed 15 minutes on the TV. That was interrupted to the people to watch the TV; on the other hand, the commercial  was influenced to the kids because they liked to watch the new advertisements that attracted to them. Therefore, our people can see the advertisements that we go anywhere,as the commercial advertisements were the most powerful in the marketing today.

The author said that "Every day and estimated 12 billion display ads, 3 million radio commercials, and more than 200,000 TV commercials are dumped into North America's collective unconscious. These days the advertisements are overwhelming to the people because commercial companies are improving their products and introduced to the people using the advertisements. For example, they produced the new products, but the people did not know about how they are good and how much effective on their products. First of all, the commercials advertising let the people know their products are good to use and cheaper than the other products. Especially, North America could not control the commercial,and the rate of increasing advertisements were spreading all over the world. Whenever we are watching TV or listening to the radio, the the advertising announced their products are good to the people. Every time I saw the new products and advertisements everywhere I went; however, I did not remember many advertisements. That was why the marketing company tried to reach their products to the people,as most people could see their product message or logo whenever they recognized and remembered them. 

 "Your kids watch Pepsi and Snickers ads in the classroom." expressed the author. For instance, the kids liked to watch the advertisements most of the time because they liked them that they could not forget and wanted to buy them. Therefore, the company tried to reach the kids to see their products easily in the classroom and also set up the interactive screens so that we could see the advertisements while we were shopping in the supermarket.  My niece and nephew always wanted to buy the things after they saw the advertisements,but my sister was disappointed the advertisements because that was affected to her budget. She could not buy whenever they showed up a new advertisements and afford them. Moreover, the advertisements are spoiled the people, for some are not good for the health. However, we could not run away from the product message and could hear like the kid singing "the Oscar Meyer wiener song." 

In conclusion, a company executive use the most powerful micro marketing and spread the advertisements all over the world. We can see commercial advertising whenever we go and sick of many advertisements. Obviously, we cannot run not to see the advertisements,and they play the significant roles in our lives.