Blog 12 : Reflection and Evaluation

 When I use the essay program, I have to think about brain storm first for my essay. I have to find the evidence for the claim and thinking about how to claim first. Every step is clearly thinking about how I need to claim and explain about my evidence. Later, I have to brain storm my supporting details for the example. I think that the essay program is very helpful to me because I clearly know about how to claim, evidence and reason. First of all, I confuse my essay about what is claim and evidence clearly, but now I know that I can use the essay program whenever I write my essay. I think that my writing will be evaluated CATW test and I will get a great score.

Blog 14 : The Meatrix

 I think the makers of The Meatrix films used The Matrix as the basis for their choosing is the same to take the red pill. The young pig named Neo went in to the real world with Moopheus. Moopheus showed him where the food came from and what the industry did. He explained about the serious thing of industry and wanted to shut down the function. The connection idea of The Matrix and The Meatrix showed to people what is the secret of real world and what people did not know about the truth. Everything was the creating of the fake things, and the people needed to destroy of the fake world. When the people saw the movie, they were educated what they were living in the world. Moreover, they understood about how dangerous of lives. After watching the movie, I was sick about my food and I did not want to eat the food by making the industry.

Blog 13 : The Matrix

There is a protagonist of the film The Matrix shows. Neo has gotten the message from Morpheus that he has to follow the rabbit hole. When Morpheus meets Neo, he offers Neo that he want to take red pill to find the truth or take the blue pill to end the story. As Neo chooses the red pill, Morpheus shows him that the screct of the world. The beginning of the story is the allusions to Alice's story to run away from the agency. Neo sees the wondering things that the people does not actually know the truth of the world. Everything is the fate of the creating and Morpheus tells him that they need to shut down all funtion.

Blog 12 : Option 2

 Neo looked at the computer screen that follow the white rabbit and heard the door was knocking. He opened the door and dealt with the man. When  When I watch "The Matrix" movie, I am interesting in what goes on next. I am curious that Neo chooses the red pill what different between real world and new world. 

blog 11: CATW practice

I read the essay " The Dangers of Reality TV" written by Timothy Sexton says that the several messages send out to the young fans through reality TV such as competition, the image values and "obsolescence of education". The successful of key is reality television of competition because it shows that the people who want to win million dollars or who want to marry a multimillionaire husband. Second message is image rather than ability because a singer who has a better voice but he cannot be actor on reality television. The image is more powerful than the ability. Third, most dangerous message is that education is not necessary to have the American dream, for many college graduates can not make a lot of money than lack of education. If you have a full of money, you do not need to go to school and learn about difficult education. The makers suggest that the human society have to think about why the powers want people to believe the reality.

I learn that the essay is the most educational. The writer claims that " the key to success is image rather than ability." I agree with the author because the out side world has happened that kind of situation. The ability is not important than the image even though the skill is highest. The reality television shows that the message is true of competition in the real world and also send about " qualified- to- win contestant over a contestant".

I found that the similar message of situation that the Olympic game in China. I read the article about  "the real singer" said that the teenage girl on reality television was not really a singer. A real singer has a good voice and ability to sing; however, her face is not beautiful and attractive. Many people watch on TV that the actor or actress needs to be attractive face so that they cannot be bored. On the other hand, she has full of skillful and ability, but she cannot show her image on reality television. The maker makes a decision of his business so that he can get a name of producer and earn a lot of money. I heard that the opening of Olympic song was very popular among the people, and also  decoration.Before the article did not come out ; everyone knew that the girl was pretty face and better voice. Her singing was more attractive to the people by watching the Olympic opening game, but her image did not show up on the reality. Now, I understand that Timothy Sexton says us that the reason of "The Dangers of Reality TV".

blog 10: Lable the claim, reasons, and evidence

Claim   ---- I want to take a blue pill.

Reason ---- because the real life is possible for human being and I do not like anything creating and fate on me.

Evidence--- Matrix took a red pill, but he regretted why he did not take the blue pill. However, I thought that he took the red pill or blue pill, it did not matter what he took. I think that motivating is the different from the real human. The red pill is re boring the human but it is not natural. I think that Matrix is Robot but he dies as a human some day. Robot is a machine and does not die. That is a different thing between Matrix and Robot. Matrix follows his dreams and motivating, but his action is faster than human being. He can jump a long distance and can do the magic thing. Nevertheless, I want to take a blue pill and still live in my real life. I don't want to do magic thing and make me crazy thing.

Blog 8 : Responding to a significant topic in The Truman Show

     "Truman Show " is the real life of human being because every thing is the real that we pass our lives everyday. When we see the Truman, we follow his trace is what he does in his daily life and what he thinks.  Truman behaves wildly and is constantly being told to "grow up",but he is immature and everything he thinks and acts like childhood. He was afraid of the sea because his father died in the sea. He never forgets of his father and always has a night mare when he thinks about his father. Cristoff creates the real world for Truman and produces the show to the people. Many people watches the Truman show what is going on next, so they are interesting in Truman what he does, what he feels and what he thinks.
     Cristoff creates what he considers a "perfect world" for Truman to live "happily ever after". I won't choose to live in Cristoff's world because the fate world has harmless but everything is fate. I think that I want to use my own brain and feeling what I want to be. I want to live in real world because human life has difficult and easy situation. I want to solve my problem using my brain and I do not like everything is someone crates me. Truman life is everything is OK with his society that Cristoff's creating  but Truman has difficult problem Cristoff's already solve it. Human lives has not get easy what I want because when I strongly desire what I want, I have to get myself. However, Truman show is what he thinks and what he wants; Cristoff has known and creates for Truman. Truman has not known what is difficult and easy so that he is immature. Everyone has treated him like a child so that I can watch a funny show. When I watch Truman show, we know what he thinks about it is impossible and I want to stop him. He needs to get out of creating world and lives in the real world. Cristoff stops what Truman want to go and tries to change his life. I think Truman's life is similar situation in my won life that has changed the way because my parents want to control me not to do this and that. They are not allow what I want to do and stop me. That is why I want to find my real life like Truman does the last. I want to create my own real world and face any problem what I meet. I want to use my own brain and to be a successful of my life.

Blog 9 : Telecommute Report out

   "THE MATRIX" discussion telecommute was pretty interesting. We discussed about many questions in the movie "The Matrix". Some questions arise through out the movie. When I watched the movie done I wasn't having a clear concept that why he did not choose the blue bill and he wanted to take the red pill and follow the rabbit hole goes. Think about my own life which ways I want to choose.  I had many different point of views in this questions.  I found out that many students agreed Neo took a red bill why he did not try to take a blue bill. The questions that was being discuss went well. Especially I learn in this discussion that life is filled with different things and experiences.  That is why I understand that the Matrix movie gives us thinking and enlightening of my life.